2010年6月14日

☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆桃園三民分校,Emma,范梓琳



The Scary Love
One day, a young man took a walk in his old community. He listened a melodiousness sound. There was a beautiful girl playing the piano. The man enamored her, so he went to see the girl in the evening every day. The girl fell in love with him, but she was a ghost. She couldn’t love people.
One day, the man asked the guard of the community about the girl, but the guard didn’t know her. The man thought the guard was wrong.
Next day, the man went to the girl’s house. He knocked the door, but no one answered. The girl wanted to see him, but she was shy. She peeped from the crack of the door. The man did that, too.
However, he saw everything red in the room. He was very scared. When people are dead, their eyes will be red. It meant the man saw things through the girl’s eyes. Then, he passed out because he didn’t believed what he saw.

學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Emma T. L. Fan(范梓琳)
就讀期數:S214
指導老師:Jayme Su 蘇意珍

得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項

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