Sesame Street 2010年第六屆尋找創作家
2010年第六屆創作家特優及優等作品
2010年6月14日
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆苗栗 分校,Connie,江佳俞
My Imagination
Sometimes I pretend the carpet in my bedroom is not an ordinary carpet. I think it is a magic one. I like to sit on the carpet and begin to imagine. Whenever I want to go somewhere, I close my eyes and think hard about the destination. Then I open my eyes, and I am on my way.
The wind would blow upon my face if I were sitting on the flying carpet. I could fly to my friend’s house and ask her if she would come with me. She was so happy and quickly jumped on my carpet. We would go over the rainbow to have a picnic.
When we got there, we saw a big castle made of candy and chocolate. There were many angels and animals over the rainbow. All the animals could talk to people. We also eat some cotton candy made of fluffy clouds.
It was so interesting, so we were flying higher and higher. It was amazing that everything on the ground looks so tiny just like the toys. After several hours, it was time to go home. I think it is the best trip that I have ever had.
學校名稱:苗栗 分校
學生姓名:Connie C.Y. Chiang(江佳俞)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Xenia Y. H. Hsu 徐于涵
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆桃園三民分校,Jerry,林易賢
Goal Setting and Hard Work
What is the relationship between goal setting and hard work? In fact, they are very closely knit and simple.
It’s just like the relationship between the cave and light. When someone is wandering in a dark cave, without the guidance of light, he can’t escape of the cave. Goal setting is just like light that helps people to get out of danger.
When one has his goal set, he will work hard to achieve it. Hard work means to put in a lot of efforts to get something done. The process may be tough and tiring, but the final result is great. Goal setting is the key element to success, but hard work is more important in order to achieve the goal.
When everyone cheers for those who have succeeded, I don’t know how they feel in the process. However, by following their foot steps, the possibility of success will be higher.
Last, but not least, we know that we have to work very hard to achieve our goal. Without it, all will become in vain.
學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Jerry Lin(林易賢)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Joseph Ong 王昌羽
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆桃園三民分校,Emma,范梓琳
The Scary Love
One day, a young man took a walk in his old community. He listened a melodiousness sound. There was a beautiful girl playing the piano. The man enamored her, so he went to see the girl in the evening every day. The girl fell in love with him, but she was a ghost. She couldn’t love people.
One day, the man asked the guard of the community about the girl, but the guard didn’t know her. The man thought the guard was wrong.
Next day, the man went to the girl’s house. He knocked the door, but no one answered. The girl wanted to see him, but she was shy. She peeped from the crack of the door. The man did that, too.
However, he saw everything red in the room. He was very scared. When people are dead, their eyes will be red. It meant the man saw things through the girl’s eyes. Then, he passed out because he didn’t believed what he saw.
學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Emma T. L. Fan(范梓琳)
就讀期數:S214
指導老師:Jayme Su 蘇意珍
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆桃園三民分校,Leo,游賀崴
My Graduation Trip
My long awaited graduation trip finally came. The trip was only three days long, but I felt like it was the first time that I really had enjoyed my self.
On the way to Taichung, my friends and I were having lots of fun on the bus. First, we visited the National Museum of Natural Science. We learned a lot about scientific principles and global warming issues. We also had “hands-on” experience on some of the exhibits.
Then we went to the amusement park. We rode on the roller coaster and other facilities. We had a great time there. Too bad there was not much spare time to play around more. It was so much fun to relax and play freely with my friends.
In the evening, we went to Fengjia Night Market. We ate a lot of popular local snacks included sausage wrapped in glutinous rice, fried chicken chops, etc. We also bought some attactive souvenirs for our family.
Finally, we were on our way home. I enjoyed being with my friends, and I will appreciate our friendships for a lifetime.
學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Leo Yu(游賀崴)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Joseph Ong 王昌羽
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆大灣分校,Tiffany,李靖柔
A Terrible Day!
Last Friday, Susan went for a walk. When she walked on the sidewalk, she saw a mean dog nearby. She noticed the dog stared at her. All of a sudden the dog started to bark at her. She was so frightened and tried to escape, but the dog began chasing her. When she ran faster, the dog ran after her faster, too. She got a bad fall while running. Then she stood up and ran again.
Unfortunately, the dog caught Susan and bit her dress. Susan was so scared that she yelled for someone’s help loudly. Luckily, two kind boys appeared and helped her chase the dog away. Susan ended up being safe. To express her gratitude for the boys’ help, she gave them a nice gift. She will always remember what the boys have done for her. “What a terrible day!”, Susan said. She will never go for a walk alone anymore.
學校名稱:大灣分校
學生姓名:Tiffany Li(李靖柔)
就讀期數:S214
指導老師:Janice 余蓮果
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆屏東地區分校,Alice,劉乙萱
The Brave Flower Fairy
There was a beautiful wild forest which was home to many fairies. Everyone was enjoying a warm and pleasant day with gently breezes. The trees and flowers were colorful and beautiful.
However, there was one fairy called Kinsi that was not as colorful as the other fairies. Unlike the other fairies, Kinsi was full of fantasies, she also had a powerful magical cystal. Kinsi decided to change the wild forest. Howling winds and dark rain clouds quickly covered the wild forest. Eeverybody quickly ran into their homes. All the fairies were afraid to leave their homes.
Then, a fairy called Tara decided to change ther situation. She flew to Kinsi’s castle inside, Tara found the crystal. Tara knew she had to destroy the crystal and made another magic spell, in her hand appeared a magic fairy sword. Kinsi appeared and lunged forward to attack just as Tara brought her fairy sword crashing down onto the dark crystal. Instantly things changed; suddenly, Kinsi’s body glowed for a second. Then, her body dissolved into a silver mist and vanished outside, the wild forest returned to normal. In the following days, many of the fairies found out what she had done and proclaimed her to be a great hero and saviour of the wild forest.
學校名稱:屏東地區分校
學生姓名:Alice Y. H. Liu(劉乙萱)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Jenny 簡禎瑤
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆桃園三民分校,Venus,謝宇惟
The Greedy Dog
Once upon a time, there was a greedy dog in the forest. He was very greedy and liked to take things away from others.
One day, the dog walked around the corner and discovered other small dogs. The greedy dog’s mouth was scary. The greedy dog barked loudly and scarded the other smaller dogs. They all ran away.
The greedy dog walked across a bridge and found a surprise under the bridge. It was another cut dog with a fish in its mouth. The greedy dog wanted to snatch it and opened its mouth to bark.
But as he did, he realized it was the wrong thing to do. He decided not to bark and take the fish. Instead, he decided to play with the cute dog. He made friends with him. Later, the cute dog shared the fish with him.
That day, he learned the golden rule. Treat others as you want to be treated.
學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Venus Hsieh(謝宇惟)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Joseph Ong 王昌羽
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆桃園三民分校,Michelle,張涴婷
Four Seasons
The four masterpieces of God’s are spring, summer, autumn and winter. They have different characteristics, styles and features.
The spring girl is the most popular. When she comes, all insects and flowers surround her. Butterflies dance happily. Honeybees do their works diligently. The sun shines on the earth, makes the earth more vigorous.
The younger brother is very naughty in summer. Due to the boy’s enthusiasm of summer, each tree and flowers become healthy and stronger. But the hot weather makes everybody hot and languid.
Autumn is just like a magician. He changes the leaves into different colors. The slight wind brushes onto their faces and make them feel cool immediately. Autumn also depicts yearning beautiful pictures.
Winter is a very cruel man. He drives away the profusion colors into a vast expanse of whiteness. The trees become lonely, the flowers become sad and the street becomes quiet.
We must treasure this each season’s offers and create a better tomorrow.
學校名稱:桃園三民分校
學生姓名:Michelle Chang(張涴婷)
就讀期數:S216
指導老師:Joseph Ong 王昌羽
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆內壢分校,Wendy,呂玟儀
The Dog and The Taro
Ond day, a dog slept in the forest in the afternoon. A hungry tiger saw it and wanted to eat it. The tiger roared loudly and the dog woke up. The dog was very scared, so it tried to run away.
The dog hid in a big tree. A cat saw it. The tiger couldn’t find the dog and it asked the cat. The cat pointed to the tree and told the tiger the dog was there, then the cat ran away. The tiger jumped up the tree. The dog hopped down the tree and kept running.
Then, the dog jumped into the taro farm. The tiger jumped into it, too, but the dog disappeared. The tiger couldn’t find it, so the tiger gave and ran back to the forest.
The taro saved the dog, so since then the dogs don’t like to eat taro anymore. The dog felt angry about the cat because the cat told the tiger where it was. That’s why dogs always like to catch cats now.
學校名稱:內壢分校
學生姓名:Wendy(呂玟儀)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:Michelle 黃敏淑
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
☆F級四格圖畫寫作比賽優等作品☆復興分校,Faye,顏呈芳
My English Classmates
I like to go to English class because I have many funny friends. In our class, Wanye is our “class-clown” because he is very funny. He has many jokes in his mind. He always has many jokes to tell us, so our classmate are always laughing. Our class “genius” is Selina. She is very smart, but she is only in the fourth grade. She can answer almost every question. She also expresses herself very well, so if my classmate don’t know anything, we can ask her. I think in teacher’s heart Selina is the best. My best friend is Emily. She always talks to me and plays with me. When I am angry, she will comfort me. She never gets angry at me. She always tests me in spelling and she never complains. Two of my other good friends are Hannah and Meggy. They are both very pretty but I think Emily is the prettist. I wish I can be Emily’s friend forever. I like this class because I have many good memories to carry in my heart.
學校名稱:復興分校
學生姓名:Faye C. F. Yan (顏呈芳)
就讀期數:S215
指導老師:林靜華
得獎殊榮:F級四格圖畫寫作〝優等〞獎項
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